The only person who listens to me but never complains is you my four-cornered wall.
Thanks for being my side all the time,
when I was sad, happy, goofy, angry whatever it was.
you heard my nonstop
Walls that were built to protect from the evils of the world
Walls with masks hanging
The thicker the walls become
Effectively deterring anyone from getting close
Everywhere there are secrets
some are dark, some light
Some best kept out of sight
Some are better left unsaid
Sounds of laughter and of moans
Fighting behind bedroom doors
These walls, these comfortable walls,
they keep me company,
I no longer feel pain.
The conversation is just between me and my wall.
This sounds like it could be a response to the isolation imposed by Covid19. Anyway, that’s how it makes me feel sometimes!
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yeah so true. thank u for giving it a read
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Wonderful
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thank u for reading!!
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You’re welcome
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It’s such a heartfelt poem. Loved reading it. π
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thank u for reading!!
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ππ
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Walls are great they do not answer back, well not as yet. They takes our desperation shouts, laughter and cries. They see everything, let’s hope they cannot speak.
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yeahh thank u for reading!!
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You are right. Very nice dear, beautiful thoughts. π
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thank u for reading!
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Wow, never through about walls in this way tho, but actually is true… Nice β€οΈ
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thank u!!
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Excellent post
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thank u!!
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Really brilliant.
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thank u!!
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Heart touching lines….
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thank u!!
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How wonderful it is when the wall is alive, silent protector, obedient and understanding, regardless of our mood… π
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yes so true thank u for reading!
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Simple but we’ll narrated πβΊοΈ
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thank u for reading!
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Beautiful ! πππ
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thank u!!
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thank u for reading!
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This creation of yours, insist me to ask the questions, Really they(walls) heard??π
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if i have nobody to share my thoughts talk to the wall. don’t really know if the wall listens. haha
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Relatable.. ππ
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Four walls to hear me
Four walls to see
Four walls too near me
Closing in on me
Jim Reeves-Classic Song.
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wow beautiful.thank u for reading!
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Touching wordsβ₯οΈ loved reading it.
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thank u for reading!
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Finding yourself, in the solitude of your silence, is the best additive to understand yourself better. Nothing like looking for the magnetic groove of your truth when you build your own world. There you can rebuild your life without interference from others.
I loved your poem. A reflection of inner life with intense verses. Good for you. Your poetry is magnificent.
Manuel
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glad u liked it. thank u for reading!
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You are welcome.
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Here I’m nominating you for this… Beautiful Award.
https://melodiesofphysics.wordpress.com/2020/07/05/sunshine-blogger-award-thank-you-for-nomination/
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE NOMINATION MEANS TO ME A LOT!!
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I noticed your writings have atleast one scenareo of your life connecting with parents, events pasts, that is a great way to share the thoughts, so by that one day in future you will feel to be connected with that memory… Keep writing… Nancy.. God bless you. π π π π Cheers
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yeah thank u!! cheers
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Beautiful composition, loved reading it.ππ
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thank u!!
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